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I am Zhilin Andrey. Andrey is my name and Zhilin is my surname. I am seventeen years old. I want to tell you a few words about my family. My family is not large. I have got mother, father and grandmother. There are four of us in the family.
First of all some words about my parents. My mother is a teacher of biology. She works in a school. She likes her profession. She is a good-looking woman with brown hair. She is 44 but she looks much younger.
My father is programmer. He is forty-six. My father often sings and when we are at home and have some free time I play guitar and we sing together. He is also handy with many things. When he was small he liked to take everything to pieces. My grandmother told me a story that once my father tried to repair their kitchen clock but without success. They had to give it to a repairman. But it happened a long time ago. Now he can fix almost everything.
My parents have been married for 18 years. They have much in common, but they have different views on music, books, and films. For example my father likes horror films and my mother likes soap operas. My father is fond of tennis. My mother doesn't go in for sports.
My parents are hard working people. My mother keeps house and takes care of my father and me. She is very good at cooking. My grandmother is a pensioner. She lives with us and helps to run the house. She is fond of knitting.
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Our family is large (small, not very large). We are the family of seven (two, three, four, five, six): my mother, my father, my grandmother, my grandfather, my sister, my brother and I. My mother's name is … She is … years old. She is a teacher (a doctor, a worker, an engineer). She is a very nice, kind and clever woman. My father's name is ... He is ... years old. He is a worker (a teacher, an engineer, a doctor, a businessman). He is lather tall and strong. He is a man of strong character - and all of us love him very much. My grandmother's name is ...
She does not work now, she is a pensioner, but she has a lot of work to do about the house. All of us try to help her. My grandfather' s name is... He is... years old. He is a pensioner too. My brother and sister are students (pupils). There names are ... They are older (younger) than me. We are a very good family. We love each other very much. In the evenings, when all the members of our family get together after work and study, we like to watch TV, to read books and newspapers, to talk about different things and to discuss all our problems together.
haven't got a family of my own yet, so I shall speak about my parents' family. There are four of us: my father, Sergey Viktorovich, my mother, Irina Pavlovna, my younger brother Anton, and myself Alexandr, Alex for short. First of all some about my parents. My mother is a house-wife. She is a good-looking woman with brown hair. She is thirty-four but she looks much younger. My father is employee of Bank. He is very experienced. He is a broad-shouldered, tall man with fair hair and grey eyes. He is forty. My parents have been married for eighteen years.
They have much in common, but they have different views on music, books, films, sports. For example, my father likes horror films and my mother likes "soap operas". My father is fond of tennis. My mother doesn't go for sports. But my parents have the same opinion about my education and upbringing. My parents are hard-working people. My mother keeps house and takes care of me, my brother and my father. She is very good at cooking and she is clever with her hands. She is very practical. My brother and I try to help her with the housework.
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Grammar: глаголы to be, to have в настоящем, прошедшем, будущем времени, личные, притяжательные и указательные местоимения, множественное число существительных, притяжательный падеж существительных, оборот there is/are, простое настоящее и настоящее продолженное время (Present Indefinite Tense, Present Continuous Tense)
wife жена husband муж house-wife домохозяйка son (grandson) сын (внук) daughter (granddaughter) дочь (внучка) grandmother, grandfather бабушка, дедушка cousin двоюродный брат, сестра (кузен, кузина) aunt тётя uncle дядя brother брат sister сестра nephew племянник niece племянница
wear носить (одежду), быть одетым get back вернуться travel путешествовать prefer предпочитать study учиться, изучать mend чинить, ремонтировать entertain развлекаться agree соглашаться
to see much of smb часто видеться с кем-либо to be interested in smth быть заинтересованным в чём-то to be full of smth быть полным чего-либо to look after smth, smb присматривать за чем-то, кем-то to go skating (skiing) кататься на коньках (лыжах) to be fond of smth увлекаться чем-то, нравиться to be going to do smth собираться что-то делать to get married пожениться to do well хорошо учиться to be good at smth быть умелым, искусным в чём-то
4. The husband is French, the wife is German, and the lodger (жилец) is Italian, but they have English as a … language.
The Cornfords live in Rugby at 28 Coronation Street. John Cornford is a rich businessman of about fifty. He is tall and dark. He wears dark suits but at weekends he wears casual clothes. He usually gets up at six, does some exercises and goes to the office. He never gets back before ten o’clock at night, so he doesn’t see much of his family. He is interested in collecting pictures of horses. At the moment he is traveling on business in America because he is opening an office over there next year.
Sarah, Mr. Cornford’s wife, is forty-five. She is an attractive woman with blond hair and soft blue eyes. She is kind and gentle, very practical and full of common sense. Sarah is a house-wife. She looks after the house and the family.
The Cornfords have two children: a son and a daughter. Their son’s name is Steve. He is 22. He is a clever young man. He works at a design office. He is a very outdoor person. He is a member of the local yacht club. When he has a chance Steve and his friends get down to the coast for the weekend, camping there and sailing in competition. He plays football sometimes for a Rugby team, but prefers watching the game, either on television or at the local ground where he goes with his father sometimes.
Steve has a number of close friends and a beautiful girl-friend, Pauline, by name. Pauline studies at a teacher’s training college. Steve and Pauline often go out for the evening to the cinema or else they go skating at the Rugby skating rink. Pauline is a very good skater and she is trying to teach Steve how to skate well. Both Steve and Pauline are very friendly and sociable. Sometimes Steve takes Pauline to the pub where they meet some of their friends and sit and chat for an hour or so and sometimes they go dancing.
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I would like to tell you about my family. My family consists of five members. I have got a mother, a father, an elder brother Tom and a little sister Ann.
My father is 40 years old. He is a programmer. He works in a large company and likes his profession very much. My dad is clever and strong. He likes to play different sports games such as football, volleyball or tennis. He also likes to go fishing.
My mum is 38. She is a cook. She works at a canteen. Her dishes are always delicious. My mum is very kind and beautiful. At home she likes to cook something tasty, read books or watch TV.
My elder brother Tom is 17, he studies at the 10th form of the secondary school. He wants to be a designer so after finishing school he is going to enter the university. Tom is fond of music. He plays the guitar and sings very well. I like to listen to his singing.
My younger sister Ann is 5, she goes to the kindergarten. She has got many toys and likes to play with them. She also enjoys watching cartoons on TV. She is very nice and funny. I like to spend my free time playing with Ann or teaching her something.
My grandparents are retired. They live in the countryside and we always go to them on summer holidays. They like gardening and growing vegetables and greenary. I love my granny and grandpa very much.
Я хотел бы рассказать вам о своей семье. Моя семья состоит из пяти человек. У меня есть мама, папа, старший брат Том и маленькая сестра Аня.
Моему отцу 40 лет. Он программист. Он работает в крупной компании и очень любит свою профессию. Мой папа умный и сильный. Он любит играть в различные спортивные игры, такие как футбол, волейбол или теннис. Он также любит ходить на рыбалку.
Моей маме 38 лет. Она повар. Она работает в столовой. Ее блюда всегда очень вкусные. Моя мама очень добрая и красивая. Дома ей нравится готовить что-нибудь вкусное, читать книги или смотреть телевизор.
Моему старшему брату Тому 17 лет, он учится в 10-м классе средней школы. Он хочет быть дизайнером, поэтому после окончания школы он собирается поступать в университет. Том любит музыку. Он играет на гитаре и очень хорошо поет. Я люблю слушать его пение.
Моей младшей сестре Ане 5 лет, она ходит в детский сад. У нее много игрушек и ей нравится играть с ними. Она также любит смотреть мультфильмы по телевизору. Она очень милая и забавная. Я люблю проводить свободное время, играя с Аней или чему-то её обучая.
Мои дедушка и бабушка на пенсии. Они живут в деревне, и мы всегда ездим к ним на летних каникулах. Они любят заниматься садоводством и выращивать овощи и зелень. Я очень люблю свою бабулю и дедушку.
Моя семья дружная и счастливая. Мы всегда помогаем друг другу. Я получаю удовольствие, проводя своё свободное время со своей семьей.
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